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Song Birds

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sarahC
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since 06-07-2000
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Michigan


0 posted 06-07-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for sarahC   Email sarahC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarahC

the wind howls
the moon draws nearer
the song birds come out to play

time is slowly creeping by
in slumber I remain
till daylight breaks
and I pray for darkness to come again

the day slowly fades
so lonley
so afraid
can't go out
can't stay in
a prisoner I remain

trapped by your poisonous love
so confused
endearing to your soul
over and over
in this twisted game you play
I scream for it all to end

yet still I remain
as the song birds
once again
come out to play.....



 
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Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


1 posted 06-08-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Can feel the emotional expression in this one. ~nice writing~
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


2 posted 06-08-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

SC~
you say so much with just a
few simple words! this holds quite
a bit of emotion in it. i look
forward to reading more from you.
great poem!!
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
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3 posted 06-08-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Sarah,...such an outpour of emotions here.  So vividly written.  Take care of you.  Thanks for sharing. *Peace.
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


4 posted 06-08-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This poem is deep, I'm can't quite understand some of it but, I understand that it's a great piece!

 Nathan
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