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the fever of love

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stephen t johnson
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0 posted 06-07-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for stephen t johnson   Email stephen t johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen t johnson


wen i saw her,
he ws like a gentle wind,
clearing my head of all thoughts,
breaking my concentration,
letting me flow free werever i want to be

my knees went blank,
hitting the floor,letting my heart indulge in the effortless gaze i had casted upon her.

i had the fever of love,
burning my heart,
clearing myself of all thoughts,
lettng my heart burn,
wth the fever of love
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Rosebud1229
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1 posted 06-07-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

very nice love does make you feel like you have a high fever.nice to meet you

 
JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-09-2000 05:40 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"When I saw her she was like a gentle wind,
clearing my head of all thoughts, breaking my concentration, letting me flow free wherever I want to be."   Stephen this is lovely...wonderful flow and thoughts.  Reminds me of the first day I met my friend Laura...I felt almost exactly the same thoughts.  James
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3 posted 06-09-2000 06:02 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ah love at first sight --)
sweet poem

~netswan
 
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