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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-06-07 08:35 PM


I can remeber,
When the days,
Were so long,

I can remeber,
When almost everything,
Seemed so big,

I can remember,
When all I had to worry about,
Was nothing at all.

 We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet.

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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1 posted 2000-06-08 12:41 PM


~*Sigh*,..oh these days are surely missed 'eh?  Great expression. Thanks for sharing. *Peace.
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2000-06-08 05:18 PM


Great poet because of the fact that this piece expressed a lot and you didn't even have to say much. Great job!

 Nathan

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-08 05:23 PM


good old days
brings some many memmories...I dont have many but I wish to live today to thhe maximum for a better tomoorow atleast and not to yearn for soemthing thast dead and gone.

Sincerely
A_L

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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4 posted 2000-06-08 05:28 PM


Oh yesssss, I can rememeber those days....sometimes I wish for them  back, but only sometimes. Great Poem!!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-06-08 09:06 PM


great poem. i sometimes wish for
simpler times as well. but the complex
and hard times are what give us most
of our character. the lessons we learn
in life influence the person we are. i
really enjoyed reading this. thanks for
posting it! take care.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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