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stephen t johnson
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since 2000-06-06
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0 posted 2000-06-07 08:10 PM



i learned alot from you,
all the basics,
and it was all true.


how foolish i was,
to fall in love,
with my own best friend.

and now i understand why it happend,
im sorry if it confused you,
hurt you,
whatever it may be.


im thankful you were there,
good times and bad,
whe i needed you the most.


we fought and fought all the time,
and all we do is fight,
and never agree on ang we say.
you said you never cared,
all the insults i made,
i new they did,
and now i regret everyone i said.

so please forgive me for what i done,
and i know ill never get back what i had,
so this i enough,think of you as a friend i can come to,
someone so special,
someone like you.

© Copyright 2000 stephen t johnson - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-07 09:55 PM


Hi Stephen. Welcome to the forums! Good work here--it's nice to know that there is always going to be someone who is always going to be your friend. The last few lines sum it up nicely. Great to have you here!

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-06-07 09:59 PM


~Stephen
welcome to passions! this is an
excellent poem. it is very hard
to fall in love with your best friend.
i am glad to see you two can be friends
still though. keep the memories and
let any hurt you may have go.
i know easier said than done.
take care.
amy


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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