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Achromatism

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Moon Dust
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Colourless, Hueless, Toneless,
The way I perceive my life,
Blank and lacklustre,
And oh so boring,
Faint, faded, fading,
And slowly slipping,
Ghastly pale dead,
Or nearly.



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Maria,

Interesting poem.  I am guessing you have been through some hard times and this is the result.  Always good to write those feelings out and deal with them constructively.  Every life has meaning of some sort...you just have to search deep within to find out what that is for you.  Best wishes and welcome to Passions!  

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2 posted 06-07-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Boy this sure struck me today! I feel that way sometimes. Like they gave me a 'gray' pill! Good poem.  
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