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If you had to go

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vandana
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0 posted 06-07-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Everybody knows,
We're deeply in love
And never be apart
Till the end of time,
Love was so true,
Meant to be like this,
But,
They say,
Now time has come,
To move on our lives,
Till we can give ourselves
To eachother,
If the time really came for us,
To say goodbye
And you wanted to leave,
If you had to go,
Please love me,
Then leave me,
I won't stop you,
you can do any thing,
It's your life,
But remember me,
If you had to leave me,
Don't forget all the love
I gave to you,
If you had to go,
Please kiss me godbye,
There were so many resons to give,
I understand
Why you had to go,
But before you leave ,
Kiss me,
Once ,
And I,
Will know you still love,
Before you had to leave me,
If you had to go away,
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amazon_lover
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1 posted 06-07-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

HI Vandana
That was so beautifully expressed when lovers had to part under some undesirable circumstances.

Sincerely
A_L
CocoBaci
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2 posted 06-07-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Oh Vandana, my heart is touched with this one
Coco  
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3 posted 06-07-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Truly a sad poem.  
Lone Wolf
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4 posted 06-07-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Vandana,

This one was sad, but I love the expression you used.  Great writing here!!  Oh, if we could all part that way...

LW


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