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Forbidden Love

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sarahC
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since 06-07-2000
[First Post] 84
Michigan


0 posted 06-07-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for sarahC   Email sarahC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarahC

We have one stolen hour
a secret glance
a passing touch

how did this begin?
how does this end?
two lost and lonely hearts
longing to be touched
by a stranger?
loved too much?
two empty souls yearning for forever..

seconds
minutes
untold desires...
whispered in the night....

friendship turned intimate
so innocent.......

can't break free
you don't belong to me
or...me to you

how rare a love like this
how far do we take it?
two days too soon,
two days two long,
It feels too right....
to be so wrong......


© Copyright 2000 sarahC - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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since 12-01-1999
Posts 1526
Washington State


1 posted 06-07-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Oh Sarah...
Belive me, I know just how you feel.
It's all very too confusing. I often wonder
why we're allowed to be put into a position like
this and "fall" when it's not right.
What a wonderful poem and so well expressed.  
Welcome to the Passions Family.
Look forward to your next post.



 ~Sheri
CocoBaci
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 3084


2 posted 06-07-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Very nice poetry you've shared here Sarah
Look forward to more of your poetic verses
Coco  
INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
Indiana, USA


3 posted 06-07-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

sarahC,

A good first post, welcome to passions. An interesting subject, a chance meeting, a sudden flash of passion....how far is too far.  Well done.

INclan
Poet deVine
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since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


4 posted 06-07-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to Passions! Excellent poem, I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
Posts 5900
Lansing, MI USA


5 posted 06-07-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sarah,

I think most of here have been there at one time or another.  Great writing.  Welcome to Passions and I am looking forward to more for you.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Colin
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since 06-05-99
Posts 612
Callington, Cornwall, England


6 posted 06-08-2000 04:42 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Great poem Sarah   We humans are frail beasties where matters of the heart are concerned... the heart just takes control and the head goes out the window. Whatever path this leads you down, I wish you a safe journey.

Eric.
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


7 posted 06-08-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

We all have longings, sometimes just for a few moments of tenderness, regardless how right or wrong it may be.  sarahC, you did an excellent job expressing this in your poem. ~~nice writing~~
and welcome to these wonderful hall of poetry.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

hippie_teen
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since 05-18-2000
Posts 18
Escondido, CA, USA


8 posted 06-08-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for hippie_teen   Email hippie_teen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hippie_teen

This is a beautiful poem, it truely touched my heart.  Keep up the good writing, and welcome to the forum!
Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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9 posted 06-08-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

HI Sarah and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!
so nice to meet you.

i love this poem...
you have wrote my heart in it...
oh how I realte...
you express your emotions well,
I look forward to more of your work.
take care, jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Lorraine Nisbet
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since 05-18-2000
Posts 221
Jersey City, NJ USA


10 posted 06-08-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Hi Sarah!

Great poem...Welcome to Passions!!

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Rosebud1229
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since 04-05-2000
Posts 1829
North Carolina


11 posted 06-08-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

so touching , Hi Sarah, I agree with everyone else on this. I guess sometimes love is in all the wrong places but your absolutely right when you say, whether it's a second or minute. After all love is love,welcome
PoetasterD
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since 06-03-2000
Posts 42
Florida


12 posted 06-08-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for PoetasterD   Email PoetasterD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetasterD

sarahC,

I really like this poem alot. I understand these feelings so well! The line "friendship turned intimate" that you used is similar to the first line of a poem I wrote, "Intimate Kiss", which is also about a forbidden love. But in the case of my poem, the relationship never actually took place. It is but a wishful dream of a lonley heart. It is posted on the Adult forum if you are interested.

Thanks again for you lovely poem.

Best wishes!
Poetaster D
 
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