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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.

0 posted 2000-06-07 04:51 PM


Will you forget me
In those long desprate nights
Or will you always remember
Those sick and twisted fights?

Will you forget me
While you're waiting for the time
To come when you will love me again
Or will you leave me  behind

Will you forget me
When the clouds have all cleared?
Will you forget the things
That we said to eachother endeared

Will you forget me
During your time alone?
Will you find somebody else
So you wouldn't be on your own

Will you forget me
In the years to come?
Would you ever remember
The time you loved me some

Will you please remember
how much I loved you so
And keep in mind my memory
Keep with you my soul...

*Ok... I know it's not that good, it's been a while since I've really written anything, and with my mind being such a jumble of thoughts, it's hard to sort them out enough to write something really good...  writers block sure isn't any fun*
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 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath



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1 posted 2000-06-07 05:02 PM


you are joking I thought it was a good one.
Writers block can be a pain i'm still recovering


 We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet.

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-07 05:10 PM


Hi SM
It was a nice read. I see so much of emotion in your poem. Keep it up.

Sincerely
A_L

sarahC
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 84
Michigan
3 posted 2000-06-07 06:57 PM


The best poems come when you have jumbled thoughts..just keep writing them down...you would be surprised what they end up being..I liked it! Good job!!
CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-06-07 06:57 PM


Very nice .. I liked this one you write
Coco

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-06-07 07:02 PM


SorrowMystress this is Great!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



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