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Will You Forget Me??

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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 06-07-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

Will you forget me
In those long desprate nights
Or will you always remember
Those sick and twisted fights?

Will you forget me
While you're waiting for the time
To come when you will love me again
Or will you leave me  behind

Will you forget me
When the clouds have all cleared?
Will you forget the things
That we said to eachother endeared

Will you forget me
During your time alone?
Will you find somebody else
So you wouldn't be on your own

Will you forget me
In the years to come?
Would you ever remember
The time you loved me some

Will you please remember
how much I loved you so
And keep in mind my memory
Keep with you my soul...

*Ok... I know it's not that good, it's been a while since I've really written anything, and with my mind being such a jumble of thoughts, it's hard to sort them out enough to write something really good...  writers block sure isn't any fun*


 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath



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1 posted 06-07-2000 05:02 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

you are joking I thought it was a good one.
Writers block can be a pain i'm still recovering


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amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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2 posted 06-07-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi SM
It was a nice read. I see so much of emotion in your poem. Keep it up.

Sincerely
A_L
sarahC
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since 06-07-2000
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3 posted 06-07-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for sarahC   Email sarahC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarahC

The best poems come when you have jumbled thoughts..just keep writing them down...you would be surprised what they end up being..I liked it! Good job!!
CocoBaci
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4 posted 06-07-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Very nice .. I liked this one you write
Coco
Dark Angel
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5 posted 06-07-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

SorrowMystress this is Great!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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