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I know that you don't love me

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SorrowsMystress
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since 04-01-2000
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I do


0 posted 06-07-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for SorrowsMystress   Email SorrowsMystress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SorrowsMystress

I know that you don't love me
That it will take some time
Just please reconsider
Blocking me from your life
I know you were not happy
That you needed space
Just please think of this
Whenever you see my face
I have given you my all
My heart, my soul, just me
That which I promised to no one
I just wanted to be free
But when I met you
You were everything and more
That I could ever want
That I could ever adore.
I know that things got complicated
I know that things got bad
I wish I could have made you happy
While refraining from being sad
But now you've given me a chance
A small chance, but one nonetheless
And I will show you, prove to you
I will do my best
I know that you don't love me
Don't know if you ever will
But in that case I'll give you up
And walk the melancholy hill
I will live without you
As much as it hurts to do
Just remember the good times
And that I've always loved you


*(I'm really not satisfied with this piece, still needs a lot of work, but hey, gimme a break, i haven't even had my first cup o' coffee yet. hehehe)*


 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath

© Copyright 2000 Kimberlee Jones - All Rights Reserved
Lorelei54
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1 posted 06-07-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

there was a time I too could have said these words...and now, my heart is so full of his love...sweet yet sad..thanks for sharing
Slashed soul
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 92
England


2 posted 06-07-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

-This really touched me, I know precisely how you feel, and what you are going through- You feel the pain of love lost, It cuts deep sweetie....I have loved and lost recently, but i have reached the point of moving forward and not looking back into the fog from which I came. You will be fine. there is always someone for you......

take care Miss.


-Rich-
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 06-07-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

So coffee is your inspiration huh....ha..ha..
I think the presentation is together...I enjoyed reading this poem...I wish the best for you in the love department.   James
sarahC
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since 06-07-2000
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4 posted 06-07-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for sarahC   Email sarahC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sarahC

Very well said..I enjoyed it...I am sure there are alot of us that can realate. Good job.
CocoBaci
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5 posted 06-07-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Mystress, this is heartfelt expression you share here on page
Very nice poem indeed
Coco
Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
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Lansing, MI USA


6 posted 06-07-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

I know you said it wasn't done yet, but I like it just the way it is.  You have spoken volumes to my heart here.  Great writing.  Just wish I could say I have never felt that way, but I have and know how you feel all to well.  All you can do is let go and hope it comes back...then it is truly yours.  Best wishes to you.  

LW
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