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Walter Poe
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0 posted 06-07-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Walter Poe

Still i cry
seeing what
you have become
without me

Deep in me
I am jealous
Of the sheets
holding you in nights

who are you now
where is the one
my soulmate
who is to love

How did we lose
so deep a well
of love of truth
in our space

What can I do
to try to return
To who we were
Can it really be dead

I still see you
When i close my eyes
when i listen
to the voice of the wind

All we created
in those long night
of passion of realization
is now shattered and gone

Am i lost
in this pit
can't a hold on
to just a little bit

 "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW
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ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


1 posted 06-07-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Very nice work. I think you have captured the lonliness very well. I enjoyed the read.

 
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 06-07-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

W.P.* You've put tears of understanding in my eyes with this....you have captured heart breaking pain with this piece.

Still i cry
seeing what
you have become
without me

I still see you
When i close my eyes
when i listen
to the voice of the wind

These especially echo my voice, I'm sorry that you too have felt this pain....there is a rainbow somewhere...we just have to find it! Thank you for sharing this.
Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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3 posted 06-07-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Still i cry
seeing what
you have become
without me
Deep in me
I am jealous
Of the sheets
holding you in nights
-------------
I still see you
When i close my eyes
when i listen
to the voice of the wind

All we created
in those long night
of passion of realization
is now shattered and gone

Am i lost
in this pit
can't a hold on
to just a little bit
-----------
painfully beautiful walter..
letting go is always the hardest lesson of love we learn...
letting go without regret is the key to setting our hearts free..
but the hardest lesson to learn
tender aching poem my friend
take care,
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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