Member Rara Avis
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
I feel something could still be changed to this poem, but even the original one is quite beautiful, in fact, very beautiful. I have posted you an e-mail saying how I would have have done this one...
All the same, there are some very beautiful sentiments put forward...
I hope you don't mind my e-mail...
Many regards, sudhir.
Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....
by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall