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d.schultz
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since 2000-01-21
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0 posted 2000-06-07 03:07 AM


Take this from me you say~
but I have nothing in return to give~
I don't care you say;  I only want~~~

But I cannot give, truth be known I don't
want to give~~  I only want to take back what
once belonged to me~~~   Me a selfish person;
No not really you say;

Ahh how would you know!  Do you know me?  I
think not!

Bestow on me your soul to feed on;  leaving
you nothing but a glimpse of how you once
were before I stoled your soul~~~~~

You say you'd go crazy even mad~~~  Ahh then and only then will you know me~~~

As I remember very well the day you stoled my soul~~~~~~~



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Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2000-06-08 01:00 AM


Just had to reply... Loved the form, style and content of your poem...

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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