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For You I Do It All

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First__Knight
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0 posted 06-07-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

For You I Do It All
~First Knight~

Oh the passion that you bring,
With just the sight of you.
Eats me up inside,
I don't know what to do.

I close the space between us,
Now my heart begins to race.
You're pressed against the wall,
With passion on your face.

My weight to pin you down,
Pressure upon your breasts.
Breathing growing stronger,
I am going to be your best.

Sliding down the wall now,
My lips locked with yours.
Moans growing louder,
As we lay upon the floor.  

Kisses down your neck,
A hand down deep inside.
Movement with fluid motion,
Deeper you confide.

Hands give way to mouth,
Wetness with desire.
Warm and tender love,
My tongue will never tire.  

Rocking back and forth,
Teasing as I go.
Kisses getting deeper,
Juices mix and flow.

I want to hear my name,
Upon your precious lips.
Pleasure with release,
As you move your hips.

I' ll never stop this act,
My name I hear you call.
Your body, soul and heart,
For you I do it all.



 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

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PanDol
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1 posted 06-07-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for PanDol   Email PanDol   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PanDol

Man Alive!
This is very sensual First_Knight, and very
loving as well!  
This one gets my applause! *ClapClapClap*

Excellent piece!

~PanDol~
netswan
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2 posted 06-07-2000 03:43 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Whoa First Knight ------ ------------it's hot in here

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 06-07-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Excellent First_Knight!  Wow!  Back to the cold shower I go!

Best wishes,
/Kit
First__Knight
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4 posted 06-07-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you all....I am glad you enjoyed it  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 06-08-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whew...I think this one calls for a cold shower indeed. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Darn hot flashes anyway  
Nice poem David


amazon_lover
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6 posted 06-08-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

oops thats was toooo good a poem . keep 'em coming. I feel like..

A_L
Aimster
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7 posted 06-08-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

FN~
lord boy you better hand me a hose lol.
its very umm warm in here. this was most
sensual and right down sexy! whatever
inspired you to write this or whoever,
keep them coming. wowsers!
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Lone Wolf
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8 posted 06-08-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

First_Night,

WOW!!  HOT AND SEXY!!!!  Where did you guys put that hose??  LOL....I need it!!!!  Great writing...very erotic.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
CocoBaci
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9 posted 06-08-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

     Sigh       
Very intense I must say liked it
Coco  


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A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 06-09-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This is so passionate, feels like I am there..whew(sweat dripping) sure makes me melt...

First__Knight
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11 posted 06-09-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

As this had gathered little response while being posted for a while I assumed it was a dead horse.........LOL  Thank you all for reading  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

Colin
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12 posted 06-09-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

How did I miss this one? Bravo Sir!

Regards,
Eric.
Lorraine Nisbet
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First_Knight~

Where the heck is that hose when you need it?

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Dark Angel
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14 posted 06-09-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Well I certainly don't need the heater anymore, this your poem alone warmed me right up. WOW! very nice David.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


ethome
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15 posted 06-09-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

You've set that biological function on fire with those leaping flames of passion.
lorilockheart
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16 posted 06-09-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

First Knight,

Wow!!! Sexy, wild, and hot.  Enjoyed it!
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
First__Knight
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17 posted 06-09-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Wow the response to this has been great.....This may be my most successful poem yet and I really didn't think it would gather much of a response.  THank you all

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

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