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A Silly Song Song
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A Silly Song Song |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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A Silly Song Song Where is the music of the night when you loved me gone away away when you loved gone away. Away to where the blue bells ring on nights when dandelions sing to be a rose of vibrant hue with velvet dress that holds the dew With dress that holds the dew dew. If I could play each minute love such harmonies I’d play play that dark would fold in listening love and beckon you to stay stay and beckon you to stay. Where is the music of the night each loving word gone away away each loving word away. To gorge on harpsichord’s beguile a tinkle ‘cross the swampland vile then in the pond light lantern’s wave to breathe again the day day to breathe again the day. If I could play each minute love such harmonies I’d play play that day would break in listening love and beckon you to stay stay and beckon you to stay. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You leave me sighing Martie, this is beautiful! and this... If I could play each minute love such harmonies I’d play play that day would break in listening love and beckon you to stay stay and beckon you to stay. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ My magic little melodic muse, ~Mona~, missing from my musing song yesterday ... was visiting with you ! ! Well, this is just an ADORABLE 'Silly Song Song'. How sweetly you sing it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Truly a song without a melody, but full of music. So lovely, Martie Liz |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
In enjoyed this Martie ... a wonderful little tune played in my mind throughout. Well done done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Expections are sometimes turned 180 degrees. Instead of a silly ditty, I am treated with a lovely melody, a nice suprise to greet the morning. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dark Angel--I think a sigh from you is a good thing. Marge--Is that who that was, Mona?...she just popped in for a minute. I think she likes it better with you. Liz--I'm glad you could hear it...there is music though...but...alas... Ron? Thank you Kit, you're sweet sweet. Mike--I hope you like surprises...I do. Thanks for the turn around. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Martie,...oh how cleverly cool this is. I love it. Well done here. Take care. *Peace. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is great, Martie  I'm going nuts here trying to figure out which song it is fashioned after. I thought for a minute it was a song about Monica Lewinsky with that "dress that holds the dew dew" line but probably not. How about a little hint here. I know I'll kick myself when ya tell me....  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Martie, A very enjoyable song song to hear. The last stanza was great...a fitting end to your tune. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Spit Fire--so glad you enjoyed! Deer--you must pick up your mind...it is fashioned after the song in my heart heart, don't you know....but I still think you are cute cute. Thanks Lone Wolf...for such a nice comment. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My God what a poet you are. I witness so many things on some of these boards only to realize what can be stated so deeply and simply is often overlooked by modern art undefined but accepted.... Keep up the good work........ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a sweet worded melody - wish I could hear it, but I almost did! |
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