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Beauteous Rose

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Mike
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0 posted 06-07-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike


O' beauteous Rose,
...in passion pressed,
Amid the swell,
...of heaving breast,
Let kisses rain,
...upon thy face,
As one we meld,
...in love's embrace.
For never shall,
...our heart's divide,
As in mine arms,
...lay thee beside,
I know my love,
...shall ever be,
Beloved Rose,
...dear bloom to me,
Rising, coursing,
...as river wild,
As by thy passion's
...am beguiled.
Flowing, flowing,
...to the sea,
My beauteous Rose,
...I worship thee.


© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 06-07-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Awesome!   YOu do have a beautiful way with words!

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Dark Angel
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2 posted 06-07-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Mike, this is GORGEOUS! I agree with Temptress you do have a beautiful way with words.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Martie
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3 posted 06-07-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Ah Mike, do you mind if I just sigh? No...okay then....SIGH!!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 06-07-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

O'beauteous rose,
...blooming for thee,
Fragrance Blowing from the sea,
...drippng dew from thy lips,
Velvet kisses upon thy fingertips,
...Raining down upon thy cheek,
soft and warm, tender,meek,
...petals opened,
Heart set free,
...Fly to thee across this sea,
My beauteous rose,
...of eternity.


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-07-2000).]
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 06-07-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Mike,
This is outstanding!
As I knew it would be from the title.
I like the format of the poem and of course your exquisite expression

Liz
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6 posted 06-07-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
You pluck the petals of the rose
like no one else I know.
Leaving fragrant thoughts
everywhere you go.

Beautiful ...
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mike
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7 posted 06-07-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you all for the very gracious comments.
Perhaps today you will have the pleasure of seeing a rose.  My first rose of the year is presently blooming out in front of the house.
Skyfyre
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8 posted 06-07-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Lyric and loving.  A pleasure to read.

--Kess


 YOUR LIFE IS A TEST

It is only a test ...

If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions!

LngJhnAg
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9 posted 06-07-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Mike - YOU DEVIL!!!  Now you've got all these ladies swooning, which makes it a lot harder for other men who need their adulation.  You hit it with this one!
Irish Rose
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10 posted 06-07-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this unfolded like the finest petal on the softest rose

 Kathleen

"How do I love thee? Let
me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning

 
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