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Dopedealer ( repost from Dark Passions... possible fave of mine!!)

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kynder
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since 04-11-2000
Posts 535
Tallahassee, Florida


0 posted 06-06-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kynder


She has unending supply
Of their constant demand.
It shines bright
Like diamond light.
No matter where,
They always know.
Can smell it on her bones.
Like water, they crave it-
Begging please to enter.
Open sesame?
Wheat?
Rye?
Plain?

Always surpass her shallow soothing waters,
Jump feet first in her
Deep enveloping end.
This poor girl.
Tired of all these laps,
Wishin' she could just wade.
... look at the curvaceous coral reefs,
marvel at the rainbow of creatures beneath,
childlike wonder, playing with glee...

But, no.
These fiends salivate for more.
Drooling for depths no man hath dared go before.
Fools.
Little do they know.

So many soft, delicate treasures
In her waters low.
Hidden entrances to caves that require a pace
Oh, so slow;
Deep, warm and comforting,
Revealing heights never known.

Hers is a heavy road to hoe.
Destined, it would seem, to be
Pursued by those who only need,
Those addicted to the high
They hope she just might feed.
Knocks on her door,
Phone calls at three in the morn,
Afternoon delight so sickeningly sweet---
"C'mon, baby!! You know you want some company!!"


*****kynder


  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson
© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


1 posted 06-07-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Kynder,...wow, this is deep and powerfully written.  Uuummm,...well, I read a poem of yours before that I had a few interpretations for and this here one sort of relates to one of my interpretations....not that this makes any sense, but heck,..I like your writing.  Keep 'em coming.  Take care. *Peace.
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 06-08-2000
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S


2 posted 06-18-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

i like this poem as we'll but i'm a fan of more of your other work. but still great job.
  also i'm reading all of your poems

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul


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