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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-06-06 10:55 PM


Purple shadows trace the sky
And fall like scattered lace
Lucid dreams of golden hue
Light your gentle face.

Moonlight sprays among the trees
And lines the jeweled night
Liquid wings possess the dark
While fantasy takes flight.

Azure eyes touch the breeze
The sparkle wafting to my soul
Among the scent of roses fair
The song of hearts does flow.

Ashen thoughts are swept away
By this moment's tender kiss
Enchantment is the feeling now
That sends this wondrous bliss.

Purple shadows drape the dawn
Which rises deep within me
And in the circle of your arms
Together we can simply be.


I cannot believe the way you make me feel, Abrahm.  Overflowing with happiness, I am, my dear.     



 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~



© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2000-06-06 11:15 PM


*blushing fiercly* Dedicated to me?  Umm... Well I don't know what to say... I'm more than honored that you dedicated one of your exceptionally beautiful poems to me, my dear.  

 Abrahm Simons

"In a moment lies eternity
And in a kiss resides forever" - Krista Knutson my bestest friend!

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-06-06 11:31 PM


*sigh*
on my best day I cant "waft" anything
more or less azure laced breezes...
I just gotta get me some purple contacts  
this is breathtaking K, truly
and so is seeing you glow with a lavender blush of contentedness...
very sweet indeed...
waft on my girl waft on *smile*
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


First__Knight
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3 posted 2000-06-07 02:18 AM


Gentle, tender, giving, and loving....this was great    I enjoyed it  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.


tracie66
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4 posted 2000-06-07 03:42 AM


This just flows so beautifully and your expression wonderful, just a perfect read  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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5 posted 2000-06-07 06:33 AM


Krista~
Again and again you are turning out
pure gems.
This is simply lovely.
~*Marge*~


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ethome
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6 posted 2000-06-07 06:35 AM


Deeply tender and soothing to read. Well done!
Martie
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7 posted 2000-06-07 10:22 AM


This is beautiful, and happiness-filled.  Thank you for this lovely poem this morning.
Alwye
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In the space between moments
8 posted 2000-06-07 09:29 PM


Dusk- Made ya blush, did I?    I'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie.  

JM- Purple contacts, eh?  LOL.  And I don't agree with you....you can make stuff waft, I've read it.    Thanks so much for your lovely comments, I appreciate it as always.  

First_Knight- Thank you so much!  

tracie- Thank you also.  

Marge- *blushing* A gem?  Why, thank you very much.

ethome- thank you!

Martie- Well, you're welcome!  And thank you for reading it!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~



Aimster
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9 posted 2000-06-07 10:08 PM


~krista
this was sensational. i loved every-
thing about it from the title
to the theme to the words!
excellent poem! really enjoyed.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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