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A Distant Land

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 06-06-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

The sun shines brightly outside
Its rays reflect off the incoming tide
The water washes over the sand
My mind wanders to a distant land
I am transported back to another place
There I can almost see his face

The knight was courageous and noble too
He rode through the forest from out of the blue
Looking invincible on his trusty steed
The maiden was sure he could fulfill her needs
She sat there at the edge of the beach
He rode up and stopped within arms reach

Good afternoon my lady he said to the maiden fair
One look in his deep blue eyes turned into a stare
She would gladly bare her soul to this man
For her he'll do all he possibly can
The couple sat and talked for many hours
Out on the beach near the beautiful flowers

He asked her to dinner that evening
Although it was happening she had a hard time believing
She went to his castle for a fabulous meal
He told her that his feelings were real
In a month they would be man and wife
For all time they would share a life




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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1 posted 06-06-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

What a wonderful fairy tale.   I loved it.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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2 posted 06-07-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Lone Wolf,

Glad to see a poem with a HAPPY ENDING from you  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Aimster
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3 posted 06-07-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

LW~
oh i liked this..liked a lot  
this was so wonderful...so fresh
to read something with a happy
ending...glad to see you are at
least daring to hope these days.
take care!
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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4 posted 06-07-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~LW,...ok I love this.  Beautifully happy tale you've written about...in such a perfectly poetic fashion.  Thank you friend for this great read. Take care.
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 06-07-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Temptress....Thank you, it was a pleasure to write.  

Jeffrey....Not ALL of them are sad my friend.  I do like HAPPY endings!!!  

Amy....Very glad I could brighten your day with my fairy tale poem.  There is always hope my friend.  You too!!  

Spit Fire....You are welcome friend....happy to share a tale of hope and love with you.  I really liked writing it.  



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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