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I Need Some Input Please!!!!!

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**Tammy**
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Poem #1


The Holyness of the Holy
The Loneliness of the Lonely
The Worthlessness of the Worthless

Holding it inside trying not to let it out,
Is what it's all about
Nobody needs to know
Nobody wants to know

It's what you don't want
you have
and
what you want you
can't have

Poem  #2

The darkness as swallowed me.
Iam forced to go with the flow.
My life is no longer my control.
The senses which I have obtained are now
as useless as the times.
Get a little and lose a lot.


Poem #3

Like a dying tree in a long forgotten forest. Worn away by time and the constant sound os silence. Alone and forgotten about, But now awake and bursting with life, but no one to show off to so spirts dampens and then slowly die. start to fade away, and gradually enter into the final steps of death, then realize the whole point of living, is to die!


Poem #4


Iam stuck with the two of you
   I need nor want either one of you
You do nothing for me
   I feel nothing for you
You won't shut up
   I am stuck with pain inside, that won't let up
It's not likely that I'll have an up day
   But when I do your always there to kick me down
   to make me blue
So for all of the above thank you so much, for making me the way you do!




 
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amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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1 posted 06-06-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Tamma
I think you're stuck with wrong people and that's what hurts you most. Feel free and share what you want with the people you trust.

Sincerely
A_L
Temptress
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2 posted 06-06-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Nice writing here. I can also say to pull yourself up from your emotional state right now. I know where you are, and it could only get worse if you let it.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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