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UnReached Love

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ParisGrl
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0 posted 06-06-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ParisGrl

Unreached Love
Laura M. Wells

You are my unreached love that I can see; you make this friendship so difficult for me
I do not understand the games you play, is it that you are scared to tell me you feel the same way?
When I am with you I feel like I have the world in my hands but then you leave and everything turns back into sand
You say that you have things to care of and I know that you do but oh how I would love to spend a few minutes with you
You are so funny, witty, and smart and yes you also have one big heart
I wish that you would feel the same way about me, I hate this waiting game you see
We've known each other for almost a year and I hope that we grow closer for the next ones to come
I love the way you make me laugh and smile it makes seeing you all worth while
I know that lovers we may never be but just being your friend makes me filled with glee
You are my unreached love but my soul I do send on the wings of a dove





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1 posted 06-07-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Nice work.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Aimster
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2 posted 06-07-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~pg

very nice m'friend! i am really
becoming a fan of your work  
this one is heartfelt and very
touching.
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



CocoBaci
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3 posted 06-08-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

My goodness, I have no idea how this one slipped thru my reading the other nite.
Anyhow, back to the top you go as this poem is truly sweet and deserving of another read.
Coco  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 06-09-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful Miss Paris..."You say you have things to take care of and I know that you do...but oh how I would love to spend a few minutes with you."  This reminds me of a poem I wrote for lovely Lena.  We all have priorities in our lives and sometimes we have to wait and be patient before our time comes and we will be more important in someones life we care for.  This is true with me and Lena.  The poem was titled "A little time".  James
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5 posted 06-09-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

nice poem full of feelings....I donot understand what my love feels at times..but when I start questioning I end up in melancholy..better wait until the time is ripe for both..but no assurance given makes the quest painful and anything can happen.

Sincerely
A_L
lorilockheart
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6 posted 06-09-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Oh Paris, I hope you are able to reach it.  When you do, grab on tight and don't let go.
Good job.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aimster
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7 posted 06-09-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

ahemm bump!  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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