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Puzzled |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Puzzled I’ve always been intrigued by puzzles How the pieces each fit together So many different sizes and shapes Yet a precise fit is necessary For the puzzle to work The pieces cannot just fit on one side They must fit on all sides Love like a puzzle Has many sides Finding the right fit Takes time and a little trial and error We take these moments and twist them Around looking for that perfect fit Sometimes we find a close match But only that perfect will do I’ve searched for that missing piece of the puzzle To complete my life That piece is you. [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-06-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is lovely Spiked ... excellent theme, and sentiments! Well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) This fit together perfectly and the ending.......the finishing touch! Thank you for sharing this!! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Kit just toying with a thought of comparing love to a puzzle. it was enjoyable to play with the words and get it to fit together right. Butterflies_don't _cry Thank you for your kind words as it makes for such a gracious reward Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rich--this shows the sweetness and sincerity of your spirit...Just lovely work here...Hugs for you... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank You Serenity |
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