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spiked
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                  Puzzled

  Iíve always been intrigued by puzzles
How the pieces each fit together
So many different sizes and shapes
Yet a precise fit is necessary
For the puzzle to work
The pieces cannot just fit on one side
They must fit on all sides
  Love like a puzzle
Has many sides
Finding the right fit
Takes time and a little trial and error
We take these moments and twist them
Around looking for that perfect fit
Sometimes we find a close match
But only that perfect will do
Iíve searched for that missing piece of the puzzle
To complete my life
That piece is you.


[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-06-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-06-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is lovely Spiked ... excellent theme, and sentiments! Well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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  This fit together perfectly and the ending.......the finishing touch!  Thank you for sharing this!!
spiked
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3 posted 06-06-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you Kit just toying with a thought of comparing love to a puzzle. it was enjoyable to play with the words and get it to fit together right.

Butterflies_don't _cry Thank you for your kind words as it makes for such a gracious reward

Rich
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4 posted 06-07-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Rich--this shows the sweetness and sincerity of your spirit...Just lovely work here...Hugs for you...
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Thank You Serenity
 
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