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Brom
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since 06-06-2000
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0 posted 06-06-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Brom   Email Brom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brom

Fade to Black

I got a bottle of vodka.
Helping me drown my sorrow.
I just don't care anymore.
If I live to see tomorrow.

All of life’s pressures.
Are starting to take their toll.
Just can't seem to get a grip.
I feel I am losing my control.

I can feel myself falling.
Into what seems like a bottomless pit.
No matter how hard I try.
There seems no way out of it.

Makes no difference what I do or say.
I just can't seem to win.
Maybe I should face the facts.
And just give in.

So I guess this my last goodbye.
I have reached the point of no turning back.
The end has finally arrived.
Fade to black.



 Love will be the end of us...
© Copyright 2000 Adam Portman - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


1 posted 06-06-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Brom
Its sad and I wish you the best in overcoming the obstacles.

Sincerely
A_L
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


2 posted 06-06-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Though sad, this is a wonderful well
written poem ------find your way out
of that abyss -- Life is just full of
wonderful things such as writing a great
piece of poetry such of this.  THAT IS A
WIN --)

~netswan
Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
Posts 5900
Lansing, MI USA


3 posted 06-06-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Brom,

Sad and moving poem.  The end was PERFECT!!!!  Very well done.  Please know that you are not alone.  Feel free to e-mail or look me up on icq if you need someone to talk to.  Looking forward to reading more of your work.

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
 
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