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SorrowsMystress
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since 2000-04-01
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.

0 posted 2000-06-06 04:38 PM


Come and sit my children
and hear the tale of my heart
Locked up inside this cold cold stone
is a once feeling being, left all alone
You see, I once was able to feel
More than what I can now
I once was able to love
But you see, that's over with now
A long time ago, there was this man
A glorious figure, a loving soul
He kept me calm, loved me, or so I thought
Then he abandoned me, hung me up to dry
Left me alone, all I could do was cry
That was the first time
I loved anyone so true
And now here is my warning
Don't let it happen to you
I gave him my feelings
I gave him my heart
I gave him all of me
And that was just the start
He took and he took
While I gave and I gave
Waiting and hoping
He'd do the same someday
I once believed in love
I once believed it was there
And now I know it's a fairy tale
There's no one that could care
No one that could love me
Just the way I am
No one that could want me
no person, no other, no man
So the moral of this story
When you are grown and meet someone new
Just remember this
They will never really love you.


 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath


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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-06 04:41 PM


Hi SM
I don't agree with you. I'm in love with her for 5 yrs at a stretch and I've had some grief when she left but I always believed that she'd come back and she did too. I think it takes time but I keep waiting and its painful.

Sincerely
A_L

SorrowsMystress
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 178
I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.
2 posted 2000-06-06 04:45 PM


I guess I should have pointed out that this isn't really the case... It's just how I feel at the moment, I am a fighter against love right now, I'm sure everyone will understand, because it is an emotion that we all go through... so please don't take this the wrong way. I really hope those of you that are in love really appreciate it, and good luck with it to all... but as of now, I am just a lowly sorrows mystress once again

 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-06-06 04:51 PM


Sorry I don't agree at all
because I believe love can be true or false.
a broken heart is only a message to you
to take some time to mend and heal
and then go out and find a heart thats true.
James

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