How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #7 Archive
 My Favorite Poem
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

My Favorite Poem (yuh i'm sure yuh prolly read it before..oh and repost hehe)

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
wayoutwalt
Member Ascendant
since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


0 posted 06-06-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

On there so high above she came
Born from a silver streak of flame
She tore a trail through my soul
Burning passion I can't control

Her beauty described in mere words
A sweeter song than morning birds
Who ever hope and ever try
To please her as she passes by

When she dips and when she bends
Her graceful body never ends
And when I look into her eyes
I see a fire that never dies

Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound
And then forever my life has worth
I've seen where heaven touched the earth

© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 04-19-2000
Posts 2428


1 posted 06-06-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh Walt,...such beauty in this here piece.  Wonderfully expressed.  Truly a treasure to share.  Well done. Take care. *Peace.
netswan
Senior Member
since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


2 posted 06-06-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow Walt ---! Great favorite Poem
Beautiful

~netswan
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


3 posted 06-06-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

It's terrific to see this side of you Walt ... this is a wonderful and touching poem.  I loved the last line particularly ... very well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


4 posted 06-06-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, this is beautiful, Walt! It is one of my favorites of yours too!

Denise
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 12-26-1999
Posts 5512
Ontario, CANADA


5 posted 06-06-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Walt the romantic?  Christopher and Sven may have some competition now.  Beautiful from start to finish.  I love this!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
Corazon
Senior Member
since 02-02-2000
Posts 1301


6 posted 06-07-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow, I hadn't seen this one....this is beautiful...it combines so many feelings and thoughts, softly erotic, and very romantic...like this one a lot  
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


7 posted 06-07-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Oh Walt! I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading this before! WOW! I have to say this is my all time favorite of yours too! Way to go bud! I LOVE IT!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


8 posted 06-07-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Indeed it is very nice to see this side of your poetry...
this is wonderful,
romantic and passion filled verse.
thank you for sharing it for the challenge
take care, jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Lorraine Nisbet
Member
since 05-18-2000
Posts 221
Jersey City, NJ USA


9 posted 06-07-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Wow...Walt...or did I already say...Wow...Walt!

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

wayoutwalt
Member Ascendant
since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


10 posted 06-07-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

my cookies dont always work and so i was thinkin bout all the nice replies to my poem and i absentmindedly typed *sniff for my password  
wayoutwalt will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #7 >> My Favorite Poem Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors