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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:15 PM



How the hell can you do this
I thought we were meant to be in every way
If not in at present I thought
I could wait to hear from you
I thought the clouds may clear
And my love you won't fear
But you just turned out to be another b****
I hate to say this
But after all I'm just human
I do have feelings of hate
I can't go on forever saying that you'll see me some day
You've won my heart and no doubt about that
You've given me sleepless nights
You've given me nightmares of fears and anxiety
But to hell with you, crazy lady
You've ruined the trust I placed on you
I don't know why I still love you
I'm sure we'll be friends and I'll never expect more
Just get out of my mind
I don't understand why I should be insane
After all everything was a deciept right from the start
I can classify you now as only a b**** or a witch
Who just seeped as virus into my blood all along
I needn't fear losing you anymore
For I've seen the light in me and darkness in you
I wish you find the right person and
Lead a happy and wholesome life

Sincerely
A_L


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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-06-06 12:21 PM


Wow .. there's a lot in here A_L ... sometimes it feels good just to get it out via pen ...

"For I've seen the light in me and darkness in you"

I particularly liked the line above, very nice.

Best wishes,
/Kit

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-06 12:28 PM


Hi Kit
Thanks and I see now how deceptive some people can be in their words and deeds. It sickening for me but world is really filled with people with stealthy ramifications which we come to know very late. I'm sick.
Sincerely
A_L

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-06-06 02:20 PM


AL~
it's good to see you are getting
this all out! sometimes people truly
do decieve us and it hurts like hell.
trust me i know   but in time we learn
to let go of the anger and the pain and
to just "be." i hope you continue on this
path and find your way to happiness again.
take care my friend,
amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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