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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-06 11:08 AM



~PASSING DAYS SENRYU~

5-7-5

Days come and days go
leaving us with miracles
taken for granted

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-06 12:37 PM


Short and exactly right, Melissa!

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?



brian madden
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2 posted 2000-06-06 01:56 PM


alot wisdom in that short piece. wonderful

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.



Honeybee
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3 posted 2000-06-06 08:25 PM



Thank you Elizabeth and Brian for the continued support!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-06-06 08:49 PM


So much said in so few words Melissa Honeybee ... well done and so true!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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