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In the garden

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-06-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

In the garden


I wonder….
  what would be your
favourite flower?
  A yellow rose? It is
        my favourite, smile
  but I guess you already
know that….

I wish you were here
   I know you'd hold
me in your arms
            and  tell me
    everything will be
                          alright

next week, I will come
    to see you and I'll
        bring 2 yellow roses
   one for you and one for me
      together we can marvel
at the beauty they
         possess
then you will smile
     and I will cry

for I will have
   to leave you there
      in the garden
        with all the other children
  that God  took away


Dark Angel
6/6/00

  



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-06-2000 06:49 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is so touching and heartfelt Dark Angel ...

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit
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2 posted 06-06-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, my friend~

And one from me.
Beautifully tender.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-06-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You have written so tenderly.   James
Munda
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4 posted 06-06-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

So touching and beautifully written.....
Dark Angel
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5 posted 06-07-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Kit, thank you  

Marge awww Thank You so much   *hugs*

Jamie, thank you  

Munda thank you very much.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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6 posted 06-07-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful. Just so sad though!  
Martie
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Dark Angel--such a sad poem from your heart..and beautiful!
WhtDove
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Whoa, the end here hit me like a ton of bricks! My favorite in sadness this one is!
I love the ending DA! Think bout the sis are we?
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 06-07-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

for I will have
   to leave you there
      in the garden
        with all the other children
  that God  took away

a travesty of justice indeed... lovely writing, Dark Angel.

regards, sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
Dark Angel
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10 posted 06-07-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sharon,  thanks so much hon  

Thank you Martie  

Glad you loved it Angel   yes thinking about the Sis.  

Thank you Sudhir, glad you enjoyed.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Lone Wolf
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11 posted 06-07-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Dark Angel,

So sad yet tender, my friend.  Wonderfully expressed.  It is always the good ones that get taken.  So sorry if this is a true poem.  You have my sympathy and love.  

HUGS
LW


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--Michael W. Smith
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