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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-06-06 02:52 AM


When I give
Do I receive

When I receive
Do I give

When I like
Am I liked

When I'm Liked
Do I like

When I love
Am I loved

When I'm loved
Do I love

I give to you
I receive so much back

I like you
I'm liked so much more

I love you
You love me even more

Together we give each other all we have.....forevermore


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:54 PM


~Oh this is such a neat poem.  I love the style used to write it and the truly touching subject it involves. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace.
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-06 01:00 PM


Hi eyesplus2
That was a nice li'l one. Lovely poem.

Sincerely
A_L

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