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0 posted 06-06-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2

When I give
Do I receive

When I receive
Do I give

When I like
Am I liked

When I'm Liked
Do I like

When I love
Am I loved

When I'm loved
Do I love

I give to you
I receive so much back

I like you
I'm liked so much more

I love you
You love me even more

Together we give each other all we have.....forevermore

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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:54 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh this is such a neat poem.  I love the style used to write it and the truly touching subject it involves. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace.
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Hi eyesplus2
That was a nice li'l one. Lovely poem.

Sincerely
A_L
 
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