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A Loud Clock Ticking (Obsession...word from Spiked)

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 06-06-2000 12:54 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Truly, I am maddened now.
My head a loud clock ticking...
ashes fall from fingertips,
cigarette--aflame, forgotten.
passion
  smolders
     unremitting...
(fascination of fixation...)
choke-hold
  desire,
      unrelenting...

how odd to call this state, elation.
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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Well, it's something to think about, isn't it Serenity?  

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


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2 posted 06-06-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

You have indeed taken my challenges to heart.
Well done and from an angle I expected not.
(((Serenity)))
Rich
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my my my...so many confessions
of bad habits from you tonite
lets see now--
if you count this one and the "refrigerator" reply and then the post in "another forum" well that makes 3---
Im so gonna have to tell mom LOL  J/K
of course my silence could be bought with
some of these obsession being shared...
LOL..we'll talk later me twin...
blow me a smoke ring...
you do know how to blow dont you...
you just pucker up those lovely lips and...
well YOU KNOW  

sorry...ive had WAY too much Iced tea tonite...MY OBSESSION...Rasberry flavored no less...
nite me twin...

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4 posted 06-06-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Elizabeth--thank you for your reply...and
           smiles back atchya!

spiked-----gratitude as always...and as for
           angles, hmmm....me very good at
           geometry....hugs to you...

Janet Marie-I can keep no secrets from you,
            m'twin...e me soon or else!
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5 posted 06-07-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~interesting read here~  Not sure what the challenge was, but enjoyed reading this anyway.


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