A Loud Clock Ticking (Obsession...word from Spiked)

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Open Poetry #7

A Loud Clock Ticking (Obsession...word from Spiked)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:54 PM

Truly, I am maddened now.
My head a loud clock ticking...
ashes fall from fingertips,
cigarette--aflame, forgotten.
passion
  smolders
     unremitting...
(fascination of fixation...)
choke-hold
  desire,
      unrelenting...

how odd to call this state, elation.

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:56 PM

Well, it's something to think about, isn't it Serenity?

Elizabeth

And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-06-06 01:35 AM

You have indeed taken my challenges to heart.
Well done and from an angle I expected not.
(((Serenity)))
Rich

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-06-06 01:51 AM

my my my...so many confessions
of bad habits from you tonite
lets see now--
if you count this one and the "refrigerator" reply and then the post in "another forum" well that makes 3---
Im so gonna have to tell mom LOL J/K
of course my silence could be bought with
some of these obsession being shared...
LOL..we'll talk later me twin...
blow me a smoke ring...
you do know how to blow dont you...
you just pucker up those lovely lips and...
well YOU KNOW

sorry...ive had WAY too much Iced tea tonite...MY OBSESSION...Rasberry flavored no less...
nite me twin...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-06-06 05:25 PM

Elizabeth--thank you for your reply...and
           smiles back atchya!

spiked-----gratitude as always...and as for
           angles, hmmm....me very good at
           geometry....hugs to you...

Janet Marie-I can keep no secrets from you,
            m'twin...e me soon or else!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

5 posted 2000-06-07 12:03 PM

~interesting read here~ Not sure what the challenge was, but enjoyed reading this anyway.

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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