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The Trail Tears Take

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Marge Tindal
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The Trail Tears Take
~*Marge Tindal*~

Torrid tears tumultuously tumble
Toppling to the trail tears take
Secretly seeking solace
Searing sadness
Seeps slowly
Tissued
Sob





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

      Love it
   all   of   it
exspecially the form
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2 posted 06-06-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Sniff, sniff...I liked it Marge, very descriptive (and the arrangement works well too).

Elizabeth


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3 posted 06-06-2000 05:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Loved the poem, Loved the form..Terrific Marge!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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4 posted 06-06-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Pretty, picturesque poem ... penned perfection!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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5 posted 06-06-2000 06:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DragonsSoul~
Thank you for the kind comments.

Elizabeth~
Very pleased that you enjoyed it.
I kind of like the form too.
Grab a 'tissue'

DarkAngel~
Thanks, gal.  I'm glad.

Kit~
Rousing reply ... resplendent.
~*Marge*~


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Floating gently on a cloud....


6 posted 06-06-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Delightfully descriptive, poetically perfect!!
Gifted gal!
Marvellous, Marge!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ellie LeJeune
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7 posted 06-06-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Penned perfectly, poetic poise and positively plenteous of P's. I realyy love this and you had fun doing it, I can tell!
Love, Ellie

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8 posted 06-06-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another gem, Marge!  

Denise
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Marge~
as always your work is truly
beautiful! i loved this esp. the
form...but also the feeling it
left in me after reading it...awesome!
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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10 posted 06-06-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

L loved the way the words just rolled off my tongue as I read this, a wonderful poem, though I hope it was not written as a result of sadness.  

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


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Not
what I
expected
to see from
Marge, instead
a story of telling
of trails of tears flowing

But be it from Marge, hence
stories come, stories go
only she can make them
flow, and glow, with
love unfolding on
in her wake, so
thankful
am
I


 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

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good poem.  like the format.  very nice

 P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

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Marge~

Moving...made me think tears take trails timelessly.  Great job!!  

LW


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--Michael W. Smith
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 06-07-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lil' Lizzie~
Just look at you go !  

Ellie~
So glad to stir you to pen your
marvelous reply.

Denise~
Thank you, my friend.

Amy~
Thank you, honey.

Brian~
Thanks for the reply.

Karilea~
LOVED your reply, my friend.

LoneWolf~
Yeah ... and even longer, huh ?
Thanks, hon.
~*Marge*~



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