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The Trail Tears Take
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The Trail Tears Take |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Trail Tears Take ~*Marge Tindal*~ Torrid tears tumultuously tumble Toppling to the trail tears take Secretly seeking solace Searing sadness Seeps slowly Tissued Sob ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
Love it all of it exspecially the form |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sniff, sniff...I liked it Marge, very descriptive (and the arrangement works well too). Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Loved the poem, Loved the form..Terrific Marge!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Pretty, picturesque poem ... penned perfection! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DragonsSoul~ Thank you for the kind comments. Elizabeth~ Very pleased that you enjoyed it. I kind of like the form too. Grab a 'tissue' DarkAngel~ Thanks, gal. I'm glad. Kit~ Rousing reply ... resplendent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Delightfully descriptive, poetically perfect!! Gifted gal! Marvellous, Marge!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Penned perfectly, poetic poise and positively plenteous of P's. I realyy love this and you had fun doing it, I can tell! Love, Ellie 02 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another gem, Marge! Denise |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge~ as always your work is truly beautiful! i loved this esp. the form...but also the feeling it left in me after reading it...awesome! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
L loved the way the words just rolled off my tongue as I read this, a wonderful poem, though I hope it was not written as a result of sadness. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not what I expected to see from Marge, instead a story of telling of trails of tears flowing But be it from Marge, hence stories come, stories go only she can make them flow, and glow, with love unfolding on in her wake, so thankful am I Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
good poem. like the format. very nice P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Moving...made me think tears take trails timelessly. Great job!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Just look at you go ! Ellie~ So glad to stir you to pen your marvelous reply. Denise~ Thank you, my friend. Amy~ Thank you, honey. Brian~ Thanks for the reply. Karilea~ LOVED your reply, my friend. LoneWolf~ Yeah ... and even longer, huh ? Thanks, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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