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Lost Love

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Dragon's Soul
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0 posted 06-06-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

Blood stains the sand
So i slipped this once
went to far
stepped over the edge

I was the one who hurt
Why should the blood stain my shirt
You stabbed me in the back

All i ever did was love you
So why do i stand here in the sand
with blood on my hands
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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow cool poem Dragon's Soul!
The imagery of a broken heart
is great!

~netswan
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
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2 posted 06-06-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

intense stuff. loved it. really vivid.
Rhavin
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3 posted 06-06-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

Kick butt poem dragonsoul.  I really love the way you too describe personal pain.  
Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA


4 posted 06-06-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Dragon Soul,

First off welcome to Passions!!  Excellent name....I love it!!!  

Okay, very powerful intense writing.  You convey your message very well.  I hope that you find solace for your pain.  Looking forward to more of your work.

Lone Wolf


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