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All a waste in time

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tulip
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0 posted 06-06-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

What makes me love you so?
The look in your eyes,
locks into mine,
you hold me close,
I start to shine.

What makes me love you so?
We need not speak,
for all is said,
it's all intense,
as we head to bed.

What makes me love you so?
We laugh and joke,
I love to hear,
what makes you smile,
what brings a tear.

What makes me love you so?
The hours we spent,
in quiet discussions,
lashing out,
our hearts discretions.

What makes me love you so?
The gentle touch,
against my face,
the look within,
the soft embrace.

What makes me love you so?
Your hand each day,
enclosed with mine,
walking down,
my heart was blind.

What makes me love you so?
Is it just a fact,
that your only slime?
It was just a moment,
wasted in time?

What makes me love you so?
For months it seemed,
the perfect thing,
we became best friends,
but it was just a fling.



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Dragon's Soul
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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

ouch harsh
but i guess we've all been there
atleast i have
great poem
nice twist


                    
Alle'cram
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2 posted 06-06-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Oh no!! Are you sure your over her?...slime!
Ouch, me thinks she knows already. Good read. Marcy
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3 posted 06-06-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Dragon,
It IS harsh, but unfortunately reality.  It's hard when you really believed in your own feelings, as well as the others!
Alle,
No I'm not over HIM, and deep down, I don't think he's over me, but I have to deal with the cards I've been dealt!!!
 
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