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Unmendable

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Rhavin
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0 posted 06-05-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

As the confusion begins to set in
I know not whether I deserve it
Could I have done something to prevent the break
Or did I give until it was all I could take
No one truly knows what went wrong
I must have just lost strength when I thought I was strong
Did I deserve to have my emotions destroyed
Or was it all just to serve a point
Who really knows what was meant by this strife
What doesn't kill me can only lead to my demise
I have begun to actually savor the pain
Instead of being killed I was brutally maimed

The permanent damage is what I fear the most
The memories of my past days, are as transparent as a ghost
I no longer know if I can love again
I no longer know if my heart will mend
Just when I think I have found someone new
I destroy my chances almost as soon
I hate the way I am present tense
The stones I have placed make an unpentratable defense
No matter how long I try
There will always be a part of me I hide
All because of the one that said she "loved me"
No longer will I be so trusting


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1 posted 06-06-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Once bitten is twice shy...this is filled to the brim with pain, Rhavin. Good luck to you...

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


netswan
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2 posted 06-06-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ouch so sad.  Lovely poem -- time does
heal these things, and trust comes back
amazingly enough --- Hard to tell someone
that when they are filled with pain, but
it is true.

~netswan
Alle'cram
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3 posted 06-06-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Ravin, So sorry for your pain. Out there somewhere, there is another who's been hurt just like you, to find and bring comfort one to another will be my prayer for you. marcy
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4 posted 06-06-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

Lot's of pain man
I sort of been throught it
I just hope you know i'm here

Great poem though

 
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