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Dragon's Soul
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0 posted 06-05-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

In the end we all fly free
Break our chains and spread our wings
From this earth we all soar away

I can't wait for that beautiful day
When I see him and he sees me
Then he'll know I'll never stray

And I'll find you and there we'll stay
Under God's great reign forever and a day
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1 posted 06-05-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

DS~ Welcome!   this is very nice!   -SEA
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2 posted 06-05-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Touching.   I loved this. Welcome to Passions.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 06-05-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

  Welcome to Passions!  This is a beautifully written piece straight from your heart, I hope you'll stick around and post more!



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-05-2000).]
Dawn Eclipse
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4 posted 06-05-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Welcome to passions!  That was a lovely poem!
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading much more of your poetry/stories.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Rhavin
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5 posted 06-05-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Rhavin   Email Rhavin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rhavin

I like this a lot.  I wish you would have let me hear it when you first wrote it.  Very touching.
Tennessee Angel
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6 posted 06-05-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

I really enjoyed this piece!  I hope to read more from you real soon.

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
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7 posted 06-05-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message.  
Dragon's Soul
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8 posted 06-06-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

Thank you all for all of you're replies more than I expected and thank you Poet deVine
for the card.

Rhavin we both know those times were tough and i wish i would have shown you sooner
netswan
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9 posted 06-06-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Dragon's Soul!

Lovely piece here - well, I can wait
for those days, but I do look forward
to soaring - free

~netswan
Effigy
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10 posted 06-07-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

Welcome, this was very nice. Since my real name is Wes I found it rerisitable to read.
 
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