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Dragon's Soul
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since 2000-06-04
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0 posted 2000-06-05 10:35 PM


In the end we all fly free
Break our chains and spread our wings
From this earth we all soar away

I can't wait for that beautiful day
When I see him and he sees me
Then he'll know I'll never stray

And I'll find you and there we'll stay
Under God's great reign forever and a day

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1 posted 2000-06-05 10:53 PM


DS~ Welcome!   this is very nice!   -SEA
Temptress
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2 posted 2000-06-05 10:54 PM


Touching.   I loved this. Welcome to Passions.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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3 posted 2000-06-05 10:57 PM


  Welcome to Passions!  This is a beautifully written piece straight from your heart, I hope you'll stick around and post more!



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-05-2000).]

Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula
4 posted 2000-06-05 10:57 PM


Welcome to passions!  That was a lovely poem!
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading much more of your poetry/stories.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

Rhavin
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since 2000-05-27
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5 posted 2000-06-05 11:16 PM


I like this a lot.  I wish you would have let me hear it when you first wrote it.  Very touching.
Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
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Tennessee
6 posted 2000-06-05 11:17 PM


I really enjoyed this piece!  I hope to read more from you real soon.

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca

Poet deVine
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7 posted 2000-06-05 11:50 PM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message.  
Dragon's Soul
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since 2000-06-04
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8 posted 2000-06-06 02:22 AM


Thank you all for all of you're replies more than I expected and thank you Poet deVine
for the card.

Rhavin we both know those times were tough and i wish i would have shown you sooner

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
9 posted 2000-06-06 02:47 AM


Welcome to Passions, Dragon's Soul!

Lovely piece here - well, I can wait
for those days, but I do look forward
to soaring - free

~netswan

Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
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disbelief
10 posted 2000-06-07 10:32 AM


Welcome, this was very nice. Since my real name is Wes I found it rerisitable to read.

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