impressive indeed... amazing imagery in this... both of visual and emotional wonderful wording and phrasing very well written take a bow for this one PoetTD take care, jm
I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~
"What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~
Florida's Foreverly Shores
Thank you all for such gracious comments! It is one thing to have the person who inspired your poem compliment you, and quite another to have such well versed (pun intended) poets compliment you. Thank you, thank you!
Great wishes, Poetaster D