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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 06-05-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

I reach out to you
Through the barriers of space and time
Never thought it would be possible
After you had died

Could it really be your voice
Cominf through the darkness
How I longed to hear that sound
Like music that I wished to hear

At first I doubted it was you
But now I am convinced
I warn you of your impending demise
Which alters all events

We work hard to make things right
Not an easy road that we take
But in the end the outcome stands
At last I reach out and take your hand

This is the present I longed to have
All those years without you here
Darkened the days and haunted the nights
Fought to save you with all my might

I am so thankful for this time
Your light has such a bright shine
Lights up my saddened heart
Like you always did from the start


This is just something I came up with after seeing the movie Frequency last weekend.  Kind of made me think about life and death....if such a realization is indeed possible as it was in the movie.  




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1 posted 06-05-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Something in this made me sad. Made me want to cry. Effective writing.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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2 posted 06-06-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Lone Wolf,

I wanted to see this movie before I read this poem...but now I REALLY want to see it  

This in my opinion (for what it's worth) is, by far, your best work

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Dragon's Soul
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3 posted 06-06-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

Excellent poem for all my opinion is worth which is probably less than Lone Wolf's

It has a very sad tone to it yet it instills that little bit of hope we all need to make it through the loss of a loved one

once again an excellent poem
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4 posted 06-06-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LoneWolf~
I haven't seen the movie,
but I have 'seen'.

Powerful thoughts, nicely done.
~*Marge*~



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Marina
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5 posted 06-06-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

How strange you would write this piece at this time Lone Wolf.  Someone told me just a few days ago that they had seen the movie too.  He said he thought it would be something I would like.  You certainly caught my attention with this poem......well done!

Marina
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6 posted 06-06-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Temptress....Thank you, sorry to make you sad.  In a way it was, but the ending was happy.  

Jeffrey....Go see it, my friend!!  It's excellent!!!     Your opinion is worth a lot to me, Jeff....you know that!!  Thank You!!!  

Dragon's Soul....Thank you very much.  Everyone's opinion counts and I thank you for yours.  There is always hope...always.

Marge....Glad you have seen.  I knew somehow, you had my friend.  Thank you!!  

Marina....it is a great movie...yes, go and judge for yourself.  Hope I didn;t ruin it for anyone!!


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
netswan
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7 posted 06-06-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow LoneWolf - such a lot of insight.
Death - we each die a little more from
the moment of birth, yet it is such a
tough subject for so many.

Beautifully done. I have not seen the movie
either.

~netswan
Lone Wolf
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8 posted 06-07-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

netswan...

Thanks my friend!!!!  Great movie if you're looking to get away from that computer for a while!!!  I agree we all die a little at a time....the final death is just the end of that.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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9 posted 06-07-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi LW
That was a beautiful imagination to conquer time and space .  

Sincerely
A_L
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10 posted 06-07-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Wolf such creative talent at its best form
I really like this one you share
And now I will indeed see this movie!
Coco  
Danny Holloway
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11 posted 06-07-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~nice writing LW~~haven't seen the movie but may do so later.  brought out your talent for sure.
very nice.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Lone Wolf
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12 posted 06-07-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

A_L....Thank you, I got the idea from the movie where they definitely do that.

Coco....Happy to share it with you.  I loved the movie BTW.  

Danny....Thank you, I am trying to stretch myself more these days to see just where that talent will take me.  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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