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Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula


0 posted 06-05-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dawn Eclipse


Water trickles down from the sky,
adding to the streams already there.
No sunshine will be seen today,
from the heavens so far away.

The sky clouds up,
it grows dark, bleak, and sad.
Raindrops fall, now more steady.
as a veil from the heavens to the earth.

A sudden light flashes across the sky,
the thunder soon to follow.
But the blowing of the wind, now more stead,
Blows this all away.



 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
© Copyright 2000 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 06-05-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Dawn,

I can see myself sitting there beside you watching the wonder of the storm.  Beautiful writing, my friend.  

Lone Wolf


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Dusk Treader
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2 posted 06-05-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Great poem Cassie!  You be a good writer, me friend, keep at it!  I'll be waiting for the next one!

 Abrahm Simons

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And in a kiss resides forever" - Krista Knutson my bestest friend!
Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Extremely well done, my friend!  You have a very unique way of writing, and I love it!  Keep up the excellent work Ms. Cassie!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


 
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