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The Unfinished Sonnet

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 06-05-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

The softest of whispers are as a shout
in dulcet tone speak to me now about
Murmur of echoes 'cross sub-concious fields
Let that which is heard this day be revealed
Impart subtle meaning to this my task
Intently I listen , a child who asks
"Are we almost there yet , where do we stand ?"
"How do I fit in this strangest of lands ?"
From these days so structured should I resist
in this small way define how I exist
Not as one cast from an all purpose mold
Let pass this chance to have my story told ?
Nay , I will not for some few also hear
that which to most merely falls on deaf ears .


© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 06-05-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Wow.   This needs to be on top so everyone can see.   This was well written.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Tennessee Angel
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2 posted 06-05-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Bravo!!  What more can one say?  

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
Munda
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3 posted 06-06-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

As always I have to read your poetry a couple of times, but the more I read it, the more I like it and appreciate it. This one I just love Doc !
Denise
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4 posted 06-06-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

There are always those out there who are listening, maybe even more than we think. Great poem, Dr. Moose!

Denise
 
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