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The Rain

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Aimster
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0 posted 06-05-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

~The Rain~
Amy M. Kennedy

The memories play over again in my mind
The memeories of you and me
As the rain comes falling down
Ever so gently

With ever drop of rain
I remember your face
And I wish you were here
Your sweet beautiful grace

We made love to the rain
Oh what sweet ecstacy
Forever in you arms
I could lay...for all eternity

Remember the words we said
The words we still mean
When we held each other tight
This love is what it seems

The rain is falling
falling with a fierce intensity
And deeper I fall in love with you
Today forever always



 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."







[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-05-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-05-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Beautifully done.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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2 posted 06-05-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wonderful once again, Amy!

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


RSEvans
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3 posted 06-05-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Amy,
This is very well done.  I particularly like the subject matter.  Rain is so often chosen to display sadness and longing and you have chosen to use it to be the desired subject.  To long for the rain if you will.  
Rob
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4 posted 06-05-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Dragon's Soul   Email Dragon's Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon's Soul

I have to agree with RSE
You have done a wonderful job
I love the rain and find many wonderful memories in the rain
Excellent poem
Janet Marie
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5 posted 06-06-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

your writing just keeps getting better and better girl and its taken on many new styles as well...
love watching you grow my sweet
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 06-06-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautiful Amy ... it flows as sweetly as it's subject matter, lovely verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Lorraine Nisbet
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7 posted 06-07-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Amy~

Beautiful...just...beautiful!

~Lorraine


 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

ParisGrl
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8 posted 06-07-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

Amy,

I absolutely love this poem.....it brings back many memories for me of the rain.  I wish you the best!

PG
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9 posted 06-07-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Amy this one is beautiful!
Coco  
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10 posted 06-07-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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