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Flight Without Wings

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RSEvans
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0 posted 06-05-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RSEvans

In my heart and soul she sings,
My loving angel without wings.
Sent from Heaven's shores above
To Grace me with eternal love.
What can be said about her face?
The shining embodyment of grace.
Her voice a dulcet harp-played song
And eyes that see me do no wrong.
In my heart and soul she sings
And sends me flying without wings.

 Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.

© Copyright 2000 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 06-05-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Robert~
Very romantically done.
Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 06-05-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

RS,

Soft and sweet, sir.  Just lovely writing!!  

LW


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Aimster
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3 posted 06-05-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

RS~
I believe this is the first piece
of your work i have read. it's very
nice to "meet" you. this is lovely
just simply lovely. you write as a
man in love and it makes my heart
smile. thanks for sharing.
take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Dawn Eclipse
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4 posted 06-05-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a beautiful poem!  and a very great topic.. A flight without wings, given to you by someone special.  That's a wonderful way to think about someone you love.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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5 posted 06-05-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Robert, this is very well done the way you call her an angel without wings who permits you to fly without wings....very nicely thought out and presented.
SpitFire
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6 posted 06-05-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~In my heart and soul she sings
And sends me flying without wings.

*This is so beautiful...and I'm so glad that you've found something as special as this.  This poem is written with style and grace and I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing. *Peace.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 06-05-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


A beautiful picture you painted, thank you for sharing this.
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 06-06-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Robert...I was naturally drawn in by the title of this piece and I was not dissapointed  
poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 06-07-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Flight without wings...now that's true love!  I've felt that once or twice myself here lately....*sigh*  Very beautiful bro.....
RSEvans
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10 posted 06-08-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

For all your replies, Thank you.  This is the only place my poetry is displayed and it is so nice to be welcomed within the calibur of the poets herein.  Each and every one of you are special to me, and some are more than dear.

Marge, LW, Amy and DE:  Thanks for your wonderful comments.

Balladeer:  Thank you my friend.  Praise indeed.

Spitfire and Butterflies:  Thank you.

Ruth:  I'm glad I didn't disappoint you.

Sis:  Thank you.  Look forward to your replies with rapt attention.
Corinne
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11 posted 06-08-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Sweet and lovely!

Corinne
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