»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Flight Without Wings
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Flight Without Wings |
|
|
RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA 
|
In my heart and soul she sings, My loving angel without wings. Sent from Heaven's shores above To Grace me with eternal love. What can be said about her face? The shining embodyment of grace. Her voice a dulcet harp-played song And eyes that see me do no wrong. In my heart and soul she sings And sends me flying without wings. Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Robert~ Very romantically done. Enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RS, Soft and sweet, sir. Just lovely writing!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
RS~ I believe this is the first piece of your work i have read. it's very nice to "meet" you. this is lovely just simply lovely. you write as a man in love and it makes my heart smile. thanks for sharing. take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
||
|
Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful poem! and a very great topic.. A flight without wings, given to you by someone special. That's a wonderful way to think about someone you love. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Robert, this is very well done the way you call her an angel without wings who permits you to fly without wings....very nicely thought out and presented. |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~In my heart and soul she sings And sends me flying without wings. *This is so beautiful...and I'm so glad that you've found something as special as this. This poem is written with style and grace and I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing. *Peace. |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) A beautiful picture you painted, thank you for sharing this. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Robert...I was naturally drawn in by the title of this piece and I was not dissapointed |
||
|
poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Flight without wings...now that's true love! I've felt that once or twice myself here lately....*sigh* Very beautiful bro..... |
||
|
RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
For all your replies, Thank you. This is the only place my poetry is displayed and it is so nice to be welcomed within the calibur of the poets herein. Each and every one of you are special to me, and some are more than dear. Marge, LW, Amy and DE: Thanks for your wonderful comments. Balladeer: Thank you my friend. Praise indeed. Spitfire and Butterflies: Thank you. Ruth: I'm glad I didn't disappoint you. Sis: Thank you. Look forward to your replies with rapt attention. |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sweet and lovely! Corinne |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
