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amazon_lover
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0 posted 06-05-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amazon_lover

Illusion is what I feel now
My heart is empty after your revelation
Submerged in the sea of pain
Only to find myself gasping for a breath of air

I will never forget you
you're my first love
I had all the best moments in life with you
I feel all worst feelings now

You've made your choice
Just carry on with life
To look back is a dangerous thing
You're happy now and that's all you need

I'll never say again what all I wanted
To feel you beside me when I get up every morning
To see your smile and begin my day
Raise a family with you

Hopes are all slashed but I hope that
I'll live to see another beautiful dawn
I'm not mad at you for what you did
May be you did the right thing

All I say is never look back
Please, it'll break my heart
I've built walls before you came
I kept myself in my own world and never felt before

You gave me a secure feeling of love
I don't feel like that anymore
Never will I feel the same
as being with you,but still

I thank you for being with me
and all I say is
Never look back and stay happy wherever you're

Sincerely
A_L
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CocoBaci
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1 posted 06-05-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Oh Amazon, the expression here just clawed at my heart.  Very nice poem!
Coco
SpitFire
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2 posted 06-05-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Amazon_Lover,....oh ouch.  This is so heartfelt and so wonderfully written.  Such an outpour of emotions.  So real and so amazing the way you showed us that.  Thank you for such a great read. *Peace.
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 06-05-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

A_L,

I can see the cracks in your broken heart.  Oh how sad this is.  I can feel the emotions you must have felt, my friend.  The right one will come along some day....you just have to be patient.  Wonderful writing.  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Aimster
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4 posted 06-05-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

AL~
Oh how you wrote my heart
with this one. you tore at my heart
but the pain and these feelings need
to be felt in order to work through it
all. the ending of love can be so cruel
and it can feel like we will never see
another tomorrow. i am glad to see you
can write your feelings. i wish you much
love and healing during this difficult time.
take care and god bless ya.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



amazon_lover
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5 posted 06-06-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks Amy I feel too much of pain pondering what went wrong. I love her so much and sometimes she acts strangely and makes me feel lost. But still she's my best friend and she'll always be.
Thanks
A_L
netswan
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6 posted 06-06-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Amazon - what a beautiful heart wretching
poem and how you are showing true love
by letting her fly free - Love is tough.

Time will heal it, but sometimes time
just goes too slowly.

~netswan
amazon_lover
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7 posted 06-06-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks netswan she makes, me do everything. I'm letting her free and it does pain me but I feel happy knowing that it's what she wants.

Sincerely
A_L
 
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