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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 06-05-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Imagination

The imagined soft touch upon my lips
tasty as whipped cream topped strawberries
thirst quenching for an overly parched soul.

You see not my two eyes dancing your tune
spiraling chemistry boiling me over
brewed into longing from a simple glance.

Wondering how you decorate my mind
your face igniting overwhelming quivers
your eyes quickly thawing frozen ideals.

Road of silent endeavors grows intense
racing through illusionary images
lapping reality in seconds flat.

You christen my vision with true essence
a lost perplexity to sweet candied eyes
drowning for more than imagination.



[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 06-05-2000).]
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brian madden
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1 posted 06-05-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Lost dreamer, wonderful poem, really beautiful.

I really loved these verses.

Wondering how you decorate my mind
your face igniting overwhelming quivers
your eyes quickly thawing frozen ideals

You christen my vision with true essence
a lost perplexity to sweet candied eyes
drowning for more than imagination.


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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 06-05-2000 08:39 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Lost Dreamer,

Fantasy is fun, isn't it?  A lovely vision you paint here with your words.  Great writing!!  

Lone Wolf


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Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 06-06-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Brian: Thank You very much.  

Lone Wolf: Yes it most certainly is.   Thanks for reading and your kind response.  
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 06-06-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So vividly picturesque ... a tastey poem indeed Lost Dreamer, I really enjoyed the images and flow!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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5 posted 06-06-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful writing, Gloria! Seems like your imagination is working overtime!  

Denise
First__Knight
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6 posted 06-07-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh I like your dreams.....hehe

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

Irie
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7 posted 06-07-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Ld, I so much enjoyed this piece.
Must have something to do with the fact that
"dayDreaming" is one of my favorite things to do.  
Well Done!


 ~Sheri
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LD~
wonderful expression and as the title read great imagination  
Great read
TC~


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Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 06-08-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I thank you all for reading and replying, I truly appreciate.  
 
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