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His Creative Hands

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 06-05-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

His Creative Hands

I'm daydreaming of his creative hands
touching...analyzing...and deciding
what course of action would be best for me.

He stretches...he gazes...
he plans his strategy
all the while I tingle all over.

He gently frames my intrigued face
he casts away split ends leaving softness,
he adds highlights to growing strands of life
his glowing warmth dedicating design.

He brushes...he gathers
each piece into place
he offers reflection for inspection
his final masterpiece is my delight.


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brian madden
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1 posted 06-05-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

that was beautiful, a wonderful poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.

He gently frames my intrigued face
he casts away split ends leaving softness,
he adds highlights to growing strands of life
his glowing warmth dedicating design.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 06-05-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

In case anyone did not realize, this is about a person in a specific profession.  
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 06-05-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Brian: I missed you while I was explaining, thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it.  
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4 posted 06-05-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
'Only her hairdresser knows for sure !'

Nicely done.
Hope the hair turned out as well.
~*Marge*~



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5 posted 06-05-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Lost Dreamer,

Great piece!!  Amazing what they can do isn't it?  Make you look like a whole new you!!  So original in the concept.  

Lone Wolf


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6 posted 06-05-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I knew right away .  This is such a great poem...so true huh?  heehee.  Thanks for posting it. *Peace.
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7 posted 06-05-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for *His Fantasy*   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for *His Fantasy*

I caught the specific profession, but also enjoyed reading more into the poem than met the eye.
Munda
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8 posted 06-06-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Oh my goodness ! Who's your hairdresser ? Can I make an appointment ?  
Great poem Gloria !  
wayoutwalt
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9 posted 06-06-2000 01:38 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i got tricked with this one ..good job losty  
Denise
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10 posted 06-06-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

LOL Very good, Gloria! Very creative! What would we do without those 'artists'?  

Denise
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...oops...sorry
Denise


[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 06-06-2000).]
Lost Dreamer
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12 posted 06-06-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I Thank all of you for reading and replying, I did not get my hair styled as so it would seem, I found out recently there is this nice looking guy who is a stylist so I was imagining what it would be like to have him style my hair. I have never had a male style my hair in my life, but I'd sure be willing to try this guy if I was not growing my hair. I don't know if I could handle myself if I did go to him anyway...LOL
 
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