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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-05 02:51 PM




~EYES OF YOUR HEART SENRYU~

5-7-5

See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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1 posted 2000-06-05 03:03 PM


Yes, I feel it, very sweet..

Parker

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 2000-06-05 04:27 PM


So much said in so few words...impressive to say the least  
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-06-05 04:32 PM


Hi MB
This is wonderful.

"See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you"

(((((((hugs))))))
A_L


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-06-05 08:09 PM


Melissa~

Very nicely done
We can depend on you to
Write a senryu

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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5 posted 2000-06-05 11:03 PM


Melissa.....you are certainly on a roll girl.  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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