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~Eyes Of Your Heart Senryu~

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Honeybee
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~EYES OF YOUR HEART SENRYU~

5-7-5

See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you

*By Melissa Honeybee*
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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Yes, I feel it, very sweet..

Parker
hoot_owl_rn
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So much said in so few words...impressive to say the least  
amazon_lover
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Hi MB
This is wonderful.

"See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you"

(((((((hugs))))))
A_L

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Melissa~

Very nicely done
We can depend on you to
Write a senryu

~*Marge*~


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EagleOne
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Melissa.....you are certainly on a roll girl.  

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


 
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