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CocoBaci
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0 posted 06-05-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

  D reaming of rain on a hot summer day
   R emembering sensual touches and passionate ways
    E very inch of her form
     A doringly he explores
      M any a day passing yet they cannot ignore
       S hared encounters together let it rain let it pour!

                       Coco  

© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 06-05-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

perfect...
wonderful sensual acrostic...
very nice...
great job, those are fun to write
take care, jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Alle'cram
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2 posted 06-05-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Coco; A happy couple you two. Nice poem and loved the format. marcy
brian madden
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3 posted 06-05-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

beautiful cocibaci, even though we get too much rain in Ireland, but it was sunny all day today. loved the poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.


Lone Wolf
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4 posted 06-05-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Coco,

Let it rain!!!!!!  I am putting away my umbrella for good now!!!!  Great poem!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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5 posted 06-05-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Coco

this was fabulous! are you in
my head or something today lol?
just prior to reading this i posted
a poem about this very subject. saying
must really be true..great minds do
think alike.!
take care my friend.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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6 posted 06-05-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CocoBaci~

Like this one a lot
Or it seems that I do
Very enchanting
Every word is true

It seems to be
True to me

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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7 posted 06-05-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Coco,
     you're getting good at these. . . I just love them!!!

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

netswan
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8 posted 06-06-2000 02:43 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

ewww whoooo an acrostic -----LOVELY
coco --  I love the rain -- a little
passion in the rain is rather great,
too

~netswan
Kit McCallum
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9 posted 06-06-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful Coco ... really well done, enjoyed this one a great deal!

Best wishes,
/Kit
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 06-06-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOW!!! Rain on  ....this is very lovely. What a great acrostic  
CocoBaci
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11 posted 06-07-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

You've truly made my smile bright tonight
I thank you so very much
Your comments touch my heart
Your Friend
Coco
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