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Let It Rain |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
D reaming of rain on a hot summer day R emembering sensual touches and passionate ways E very inch of her form A doringly he explores M any a day passing yet they cannot ignore S hared encounters together let it rain let it pour!  Coco |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect... wonderful sensual acrostic... very nice... great job, those are fun to write take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Coco; A happy couple you two. Nice poem and loved the format. marcy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful cocibaci, even though we get too much rain in Ireland, but it was sunny all day today. loved the poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, Let it rain!!!!!! I am putting away my umbrella for good now!!!! Great poem!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Coco this was fabulous! are you in my head or something today lol? just prior to reading this i posted a poem about this very subject. saying must really be true..great minds do think alike.! take care my friend. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ Like this one a lot Or it seems that I do Very enchanting Every word is true It seems to be True to me ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, you're getting good at these. . . I just love them!!! Excellent!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
ewww whoooo an acrostic -----LOVELY coco -- I love the rain -- a little passion in the rain is rather great, too ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Coco ... really well done, enjoyed this one a great deal! Best wishes, /Kit |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW!!! Rain on ....this is very lovely. What a great acrostic |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You've truly made my smile bright tonight I thank you so very much Your comments touch my heart Your Friend Coco |
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