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Marina
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0 posted 2000-06-05 12:16 PM


    I'm sorry that the flow and story couldn't be better.  Definitly not my best, but I wanted to try this form.

1000th Post Poem!!!


“Because God has a Sense of Humour”
And he used his “Hand of Fate”
To gave me hope ”In Light of Love Above”
So Passion’s “My Immortal Beloved”
One of “ The Messenger’s of God”

“But on Second Thought”
I’ll put away my  “Rose-coloured Glasses”
Perhaps it is Passions “Legend”
Or it’s “Love ‘s Potion”
That gave me “ A Gift of Forever”

Just like “Peas and Carrots”
Yes, I do “Believe”
“When All is Said and Done”
And I have been “Wrapped in Rhapsody”
I’ll  wonder what I did “Before Love”?

No more “Sting of the Thorn”
Or “Faded Perfume” for me
Just the Occasional “Trail of Tears”
From “ This Little Light of Mine”
“ My Heart Hopes”!!!

Yes, in Passions, “When Love Finds You”
Just take “ What Dreams May Come”
Or you may “Reign the Rain”
Or take a last “Kiss Before Dying”
But shhhhh! “These Are the Things I’ve Never Said”

Marina June 2000




[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-05-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-06-05 12:34 PM


Marina~ Congrats on 1000!!!   This is really cute. I like it! -SEA
amazon_lover
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2 posted 2000-06-05 12:41 PM


Hi Marina
That was exhilarating. I had used a pnemonic like this to remember all the tales of Shaksphere in my high school. Its wonderful.
((((((hugs)))))
A_L

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-06-05 02:19 PM


hey girl...
now its my turn...CONGRATS!!!!
kinda like having a birthday aint it LOL

this is GREAT why are you apolgizing..
its creative and imaginative
and thats the whole point of poetry and here to be inspired and try new things...
happy 1000 post day LOL
later-marina-gator
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 2000-06-05 05:31 PM


Congrats on the 1000  

This is very creative, not a whole lot of poets could meld the titles of their poems into one piece and make it read this well.

Very nice writing  

 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Lorraine Nisbet
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5 posted 2000-06-05 05:44 PM



Marina~

Very creative and well done!  Congratulations on 1000!!¡¡!!

~Lorraine~

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


Aimster
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6 posted 2000-06-05 07:14 PM


Marina~
Congrats on 1000 posts! That is
quite an accomplishment in my book!
Excellent poem you have here. Very
creative and put together well. You
had an awesome idea and I must say
did very well with it. Take care.
Amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-06-05 07:18 PM


Congratulations, Marina~
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-06-05 07:21 PM


Marina,

Congratulations on number 1000!!!  Quite an accomplishment...I like the approach on the poem....very original!!  Keep up the good work!!  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Marina
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9 posted 2000-06-05 09:43 PM


Thank you to all!!!   When I wrote my first poem 4 months ago, I would never have dreamed of this!


Sea and A L, Thank you both very much.

Jan, thank you.  I respect your work very much.  So this coming from a wonderful poet and friend, I truly thank you.

Jeff, thank you very much!  I can always count on you to say the sweetest things to make me feel good.  ( Give you the $5 tomarrow )

Lorraine and Amy, thank you.  It seemed like a good idea at the time.....just wished it would have worked out better.  Things so easily in your mind, just somehow never get to the paper right!  Thanks again.

Marge, thank you.  I don't think I will ever be as good as you though!

LW, thanks.  I am glad you liked the idea.

Marina

Parker
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10 posted 2000-06-05 11:09 PM


Marina, congrats on the big 1000, you'll pass me soon, no doubt. I really like the titles poem, very cool idea, and you pulled off so well.

james

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11 posted 2000-06-05 11:49 PM


Marina, this is too cool!!  What a great idea!!  It flows well, what do you mean it doesn't??

Congratulations!!!  You have just gotten better every day!!!

---------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
12 posted 2000-06-06 10:21 AM


James, thank you, but I don't think you have to worry about me passing you.  At least not as far as the quality of your poetry is concerned.

Sven, thank you

Marina

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-06-07 04:35 PM


Marina has finally done 1000..whoa..actually its not that hard...it only means sacrificing your social life and donating the services of your fingers to the keyboard for countless hours that never seem to end...ha...ha....isn't this sad but true...but we must get some enjoyment out of this because we come back for more.
I will drink a few glasses of wine, with delicious cheeses and some french bread in celebration.  I have to get away from this computer so I can go and buy that right now.  Take care hon.   James

Marina
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14 posted 2000-06-08 11:49 AM


James LOL!  You are a sweetie!  Thank you very much. ( and drink all that wine to yourself.....save some for me! )

Marina

ethome
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15 posted 2000-06-08 01:31 PM


Wow! 1000 that's quite an accomplishment. Poetry must flow out of you like a word fountain. I'm very pleased to meet you.
The poem above is very touching and heart rendering work.

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
16 posted 2000-06-08 02:32 PM


Marina~
     Congratulations on your 1000th post, dear!  I love the way you put this one together -- so creative!  Now, just keep giving us more!



Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
17 posted 2000-06-08 10:27 PM


ethome, thank you....but I wish they did.

Terry, thank you....you are a sweetie!

Marina

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