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Would you still love me? (For DA)

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WhtDove
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0 posted 06-05-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

If I could strip away
All the things I do
Would you still love me?

If I quite doing dinner
If the laundry didn't get done
Would you still love me?

If you came home
To a house not clean
Would you still love me?

If you stripped away
All I do and all I give
Would you still love me?

Would you love me
For who I am to you?
Would you still love me?

Can't you see
That in all those things
I put my love?

But even without them
I still love you,
Would you still love me?


DA I don't know why this popped in mind last night, but it did. From your view point. I might be way off here. But in any case I hope it helps you some!
You have many ~HUGS~ from me, I'm sorry I haven't been there lately. But I am now! You're so sweet, and I hope things brighten up for you soon!
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1 posted 06-05-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

WhtDove, I'm sure with people like you things can't help but look brighter. Dark Angel--here's a smile for you:

        

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


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2 posted 06-05-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thats a very sweet poem, everyone needs to be loved for who they are and not what they do otherwise you just end up loving lies . I like this poem very much, it re-expressed what already knew but couldn't accept . Thanks .
L.of.L. Tom .
o )


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WhtDove
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3 posted 06-05-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Liz you're so sweet, but I'm not so sure about making things brighter around everyone.
But thank you for such a sweet comment.

Tom, I hope it helps others see, it's not just what we do. It's how we feel, and putting those feeling into the things we do.
Sometimes we love for the wrong reasons. So take away all the other things, and really look at the person. Do we still love them for them? Or because of what they do?
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4 posted 06-05-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Angel, I knew there was a reason why I called you Angel   because you are an Angel!!! This is really really beautiful and so sweet of you to have thought of me and actually pen a poem, a beautiful poem. It is a really good question isn't it, Would you still love me?  
Thank you Rebecca, Thanks for being around when I've been down and making my heart smile   You are a friend to be treasured and I will treasure you.  
NOW I NEED SOME MICKEY!!! ya gonna give it to me???
Well I'll just go hop along my way home RIBBIT RIBBIT RIBBIT hiccup RIBBIT RIBBIT hiccup  hehehe
Luv ya
*hugs*


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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5 posted 06-05-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

WhtDove

this was quite touching
and beautiful. you write from
the heart, and pose a very
interesting question. great poem.
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



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6 posted 06-05-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

DA I didn't know if it would hit home or not!
I've not been there as much as I should, and I'm sorry for that. I don't know if Mickey will work on here but I'll give it a try

O
  =o)
O
   There ya go! Now quit with that ribbit! Love ya girl! Cheer up!

Aimster thank you! I hope it's something everyone can think about.
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7 posted 06-05-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

WhtDove; I like your thoughts on this one. I think I will run a copy with yes or no choices and give my husband a test. I don't want him to fail. Different and delightful.
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8 posted 06-05-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If I came home from working at the factory all day
From doing work I hated just to earn a decent pay
And when I walked into the house, the whole place was a mess
And you were saying "Do you love me?" I would say "I guess."

If all my clothes were dirty 'cause the laundry wasn't done
While you were playing Bingo with the girls and having fun
And the dishes overflowed the counters and the kitchen sink
As you were saying "Do you love me?". I would say "I think."

If I had to clear a pathway through the den with a machete
And the living room took on a semblance of the Serenghetti
And you said you wanted me to love you just for who you are
You can rest assured that I will always love you - from afar!


Now, ladies, don't attack me! I'm just having some fun with dovey and interjecting a man's point of view here. Put those daggers down! It's a joke!!!! Oh, jeez.....

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Balladeer~well since you made me laugh, I'll overlook it this time but I'm not so sure about any other time. LOL very cute!

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


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Uh oh Marcy! Let's hope he don't come up with some like Balladeer did here    
Good luck!

Michael, I've thought on this some, and I still don't know what to say...
I guess it all comes down to what happens in the Dead Sea right?    You're funny, and you really made me laugh! You nut...quit messing with me! LOL  These women are gonna kick yur butt    I'm sure they'll have all the pleasure in the world when they do it too    Right LJA?

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11 posted 06-06-2000 02:33 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Earth to Apollo.. The test has been scrubbed, 'cause the kitchen is not. marcy
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12 posted 06-06-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

YAY!!!  I GOT MICKEY!!  woohoooo, thanks Angel   *hugs*

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


WhtDove
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LOL Marcy! So did he pass?

DA, Hey Mickey your so fine, your so fine ya blow my mind, HEY MICKEY!
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14 posted 06-06-2000 05:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Believe me when I say I shudder to ask this but.....what's a Mickey?????
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Hi WhtDove
Thats a wonderful msg that you've brought out. People can sacrifice something for their love but to sacrifice love is nothing but death.

Sincerely
A_L
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ROTFLMAO
Balladeer I see you just can't stay out of trouble still! And I don't know about yours but mine isn't named Mickey...
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Very touching poem, Rebecca! I can see that it hit the spot with DA!  

Hillarious Poem, Balladeer! ROFL  
Mickey is Mickey Mouse....a funny face that Rebecca does on ICQ

Denise

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18 posted 06-06-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This poem has lots of feeling and sincere heartfelt words and sentiments, WhiteDove. We all need to be loved unconditionally, y'know?
--------

Michael... what's got into you? LOL
machete/spaghetti??? geesh!! ROFL... too too funny... hehe
hehe... i can't stop laughing...at balladeer's response... geez!!
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19 posted 06-06-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well Michael, I could weave you a story bout what might you call things, but I won't. LOL

It's just plain ol MICKEY MOUSE!
O
=o)    See! There's Mickey! ok?
O


Amazon no truer words than what you spoke! Thank you.

Denise thank you, I hope it hit the spot.

Doreen thanks a bunch! I know only too well.
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touching
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