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Sighs So Sweetly Shed

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Marge Tindal
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Sighs So Sweetly Shed
~*Marge Tindal*~


Softening summer sounds surround
Shushing shrouded sighs so sweetly shed
Sharing serenity seemed safely secured
Summoning silence surely sealed
Spoken
Savored
Satisfied






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 06-05-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Softly, sweetly spoken sounds
sends shivers soaring
searching souls
silence seeks
shedding sighs

superb  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-05-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

sweet sighs
silent sighs
special sighs
sensual sighs
sexy sighs
sinful sighs
soulful sighs
serene sighs
simple sighs
supreme sighs
superb sigh

shall i spare you  
perfect poem margie-girl
jm



 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Irish Rose
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3 posted 06-05-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

how in the world did you do this?
it's simply stupendous!

 "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning
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4 posted 06-05-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Such simply stated splendid sighs - Bonnie
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5 posted 06-05-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Sigh....

Elizabeth


 And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why?


angelswing
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6 posted 06-05-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Simply super,
sunshine surender,
special sensual,
secrets,
remember .

L.of.L. Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
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Marge, what a feeling I got reading this one! wow  
SpitFire
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~Marge,...you are much too talented for me to ever stand next to Haha.....Love this...love your work.  You know that though . Take care. *Knew this would be good right as I was opening it.
Marge Tindal
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Tracie~
I like your reply. Thanks.

JanetMarie~
Enjoyed yours too.

Kathleen~
It just fell to the page.
So surprising !

BSC~
Thanks, liked your reply.

Elizabeth~
Simply said.  Thanks.

AngelSwing~
Simply thanks.

PassingShadows~
Good to see you.  

SpitFire~
I so apprecite you.
Thank you very much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cerenity
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10 posted 06-06-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

SUPER SPECIAL


Love,Cerenity
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 06-06-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Superb song simply stupendous!!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Tennessee Angel
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12 posted 06-06-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Marge --  This was amazing!  After reading so many of your poems, however, I am not surprised at its perfection.  I loved reading it and it left me with a smile on my face...or should I say a sigh on my lips.  Wonderful!!!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
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This is an alliteration!  (cheering that I remembered one of my Lit. terms, lol)...absolutely beautiful Marge, I enjoyed it a lot!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~


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Simply superior sigh!
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 12-20-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cerenity~
Thank you so much.
*Sorry to have been neglectful in my response time.

LoneWolf~
Thank you so much.

TennesseeAngel~
Here we are into December -
Soft remembers of you.
Hope you are well, my friend.

Krista~
Thanks, gal.
Hope you got an A+ in that Lit class.

Martie~
So glad to share a *sigh* with you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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