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Soft, Sweet and Neat

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JamesMichael
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Soft,  Sweet and Neat

Met a woman just the other day.
At first I didn't like her in too many ways.
But she sure was soft.
Not her breast or anything.
I mean actually they did look soft
but I didn't touch them.
Don't get me wrong.
If she had said to me they sure are soft,
go ahead and touch them and see if you agree with me, I would gladly do that for her.
I only mentioned to her that she had a very nice tan.
And she told me yeah, I have a nice tan line.
Before I could stop her she showed me a tan line I wanted to meet.
I think this was about the time I started thinking to myself, you know she is kind of sweet.
I mean she was one of the friendliest woman I ever did meet.
You know, I sure do like women that are open and honest and expressive and neat.
Yeah, that's the word I was looking for.
Neat women are the one's that I adore.
We talked awhile and she did a good job of making me laugh and smile.
Found out both of us enjoy the sun, a good tan, and some beach fun.
So after all was said and done we set a date to enjoy some sun.
Seems she had a notion
I was the one who could apply the lotion
right onto those hard to reach places
in the middle of her back.
And if this attention resulted in an even tan
there was a possibility I could become her permanent
suntan lotion man.
Always my pleasure to meet
an interesting and delightful woman
that turns out to be soft, sweet, and neat.

Jameslee@June05,2000

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1 posted 06-05-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Soft,  Sweet and Neat....this here poem just can't be beat.  haha.  You are too much.  Hope the beach date goes well .
Janet Marie
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2 posted 06-05-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

James, James, James,

so many women, so little time..LOL
very sweet poem SBJ..you devil you  
me thinks your gonna have a hot summer  
cabana boy-cassanova LOL
later-suntan lotion-gator
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

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3 posted 06-05-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~ You Made Me Blush!! This was really fun to read. You're silly.   I think it's great.   -SEA
Jana Tovey
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4 posted 06-05-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Jana Tovey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jana Tovey

You never even hinted if the tan line was the bottom line.  Such a gentleman.

Ha ha...good laugh.  Now I have a picture of someone who is quite cheeky (no pun intended).
JamesMichael
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5 posted 06-06-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you SpitFire, Janet, Sea and Jana.  I wrote this to be funny...when I was with her she made me laugh and smile..so upbeat and pleasant, so intelligent...the type of woman that I love to be around.
I met her at a club and the tan line she showed me was on the top.   James
JamesMichael
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6 posted 10-17-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

To the top for NaNa...James
 
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