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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-06-05 06:46 AM





We are two but together we're one
A circle of love we have become

Warm, sweet, beautiful and tender
This circle complete nothing to surrender

Life has meaning we have our goals
Our circle of love to warm our souls

Together we flow like falling cascades
A full circle of love that never fades

Our love goes round flowing free
A circle of love between you and me

Our circle of love not yet fully put to the test
But I know in my heart that together we'll rest

In life and in death we will always be one
The circle of our love never to come undone
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 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-05-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-06-05 06:52 AM


Tracie~
I love circles.
Round and round our lives
they encircle us ... spinning us
into the life of others.

Enjoyed your circles, hon.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-06-05 07:03 AM


This was so tender and romantic Tracie, lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-06-05 07:08 AM


Hello Marge  
The circles in our lives are made up of a variety of people who make our lives better, worthwhile, happy and complete and thats what is so special about friends and lovers.
Glad you liked my circles

Luv Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleOne
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4 posted 2000-06-05 07:09 AM


The title is perfect, I love it. I love the poem too, a wonderful read!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



tracie66
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5 posted 2000-06-05 07:18 AM


Peekaboo Kit
I didn't see you
You snuck in there  
Glad you liked this tender little piece..Thanks
TC~

EagleOne~
Thanks hon for the wonderful comment you just became part of the circle  
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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6 posted 2000-06-05 08:40 AM


this is beautiful and perfect trac,
wisdom and grace from your pen
very sweet read  
later-poet-gator
jm

 I think I could need - this in my life
I think I'm just scared - that I know too much
I can't relate and that's a problem
I'm feeling ...
If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room
But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something me...
In everything in you.
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Aimster
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7 posted 2000-06-05 09:11 AM


Tracie~~

Your titles always make me stop and
read...always so creative. I LOVED this poem.
So beautiful. I especially liked
this particular stanza...
"Together we flow like falling cascades
A full circle of love that never fades

Our love goes round flowing free
A circle of love between you and me"
That is JUST SO BEAUTIFUL!! You are
apparently in love my friend...and it
looks so well on you! Take care.
Amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2000-06-05 09:36 AM


Entwined hands, one in another,
Four palms held together form a pair,
A circle of love, touch like soft feather,
Bloomed flowers, now even life appears fair...

Marriage of soul, joining of hearts,
There are no more parts,
There is no more you nor is there any I,
Together in this circled sky we will fly high...
------
Tracie,
You have written a beautiful piece of poetry here, felt so good that I got carried away a bit....

regards, sudhir.

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 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall




[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-05-2000).]

SpitFire
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9 posted 2000-06-05 10:57 AM


~Tracie,..a circle...a continuous symbol...I loved this.  You have a beautiful poem here and a wonderful circle of love it seems...so good to know that.  Thank you for sharing this. *Peace.
tracie66
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Posts 4713
Australia
10 posted 2000-06-07 02:58 AM


JM~
Thanks sweetie  
I don't know about wisdom
but it is the way my heart feels..TC~

Hi Aim
Thanks sweetie, well I am so lucky to have a wonderful hubby that I'm still in love with after nearly 15yrs together...only hope he's still in love with me  
TC~

Sudhir~
You amaze me my friend
What you have written is truly
beautiful and if you don't mind
can I print this page with your reply
I just melted upon reading it.
Thanks hon  
TC~

Spitfire~
Hello  thankyou to sweetie, your reply was appreciated.
TC~< !signature-->

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-07-2000).]

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 2000-06-07 03:22 AM


Thanks tracie, thanks...

Of course you can print whatever you want, this is after all your page, your poem and a mere few little words from me...  

regards, sudhir

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-06-07 03:47 AM


Sudhir~
I wouldn't say mere words they were inspiring  
Trace~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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